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Razyren -ShinXChangeWIP

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This is STILL a work-in-progress for the June #ShinXChange. Thought I'd have it done by now since I've been working on it for like forever... but I keep doing more and more... If I hadn't decided to do actual fur, it might have not taken me so long. YET IT LOOKED SO PRETTY XD So I did so anyways.

I haven't even gotten to the wings yet!

She's happily basking in the sun...mmk!!

Razyren © ~autumnalone
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Crits a coming! I will crit here since I don't have the privilages for a full crit according to DA. whatever.

First thing, that watermark is really huge and makes it hard for me to really critique the pic. I think if it wasn't so dark it wouldn't be as bothersome. Most artists try to hide their signature somewhere in a corner, and if you're worried about someone stealing, well, it's a WIP.

Hmm, basking in the sun? Looks to me like she's doing some kind of crazy flip in the air. Maybe a little less stressful look on the face, and a grounding shadow, would help the look you're going for. That pose looks just a little too painful for a peaceful basking in the sun time. I dunno. The fur looks pretty cool though =) Don't take too much time on it.